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Luna Lineart - wip by GimmoGear Luna Lineart - wip by GimmoGear
Oh, it's Luna again...
Here is an anticipation of my next "serious" work. I got the idea for this about one month ago, but I've never really developed it until these last few days. I feel like it is going to come out way better than how I expected.
Well, for now I just hope you like this little tribute to our beloved princess of the night.
Soon I will submit the complete work, so stay tuned!
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HareTrinity Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Few things... First, in the show her fringe tends to cover the horn, not surround it: [link]

Next: In the show the moon of her cutie mark is larger than you've done it: [link]

A minor thing: The tail being the only incomplete part of the image sticks out. This could be used for a more dynamic effect but it's worth thinking over. Looking at the angle of the hooves now (which seem to be on the ground since they're both flat at the same level) I'm guessing it's intentional.

More complicated: Her left foreleg (furthest to our right) looks a little stocky... The show isn't strict on it but normally the forelegs thin a little to the "knee" (horse term, wrist if you know the pentadactyl limb view). [link] [link] It's subtle and mostly only emphasised if the hooves are turned slightly, which yours aren't but at the moment it somewhat stops the forelegs looking as elegant as the hind ones.

In my opinion anyway, and I thought lineart stage is probably a better time then end product to point out nitpicks. :)
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HareTrinity Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^ (Not to imply it isn't already nice even if you ignore everything I've said, they're just little things!)
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GimmoGear Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know about her horn, but I prefer it like this :)
You are right about the knee, I will fix it!
Actually she was meant to be flying, and I have already completed the background sky, but now that you mention it I am viewing it under another perspective, and it could be interesting if I try and make a background that make she look like she is rearing up. Maybe I will upload both versions, but I suck at backgrounds.
Btw, thanks a lot. Really!
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HareTrinity Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
"I know about her horn, but I prefer it like this" - That's fine, the show fringe does look a little weird! :D

I look forward to seeing the finished product!
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GimmoGear Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey! I have finally made it! ^^
Here's the link [link] if you haven't already seen it.
Let me know what do you think =)
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HareTrinity Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
[Goes to see]
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EaLicaria Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
I like it! -w-
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GimmoGear Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yay! Thank you!
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EaLicaria Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
^-^
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