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Next: In the show the moon of her cutie mark is larger than you've done it: [link]
A minor thing: The tail being the only incomplete part of the image sticks out. This could be used for a more dynamic effect but it's worth thinking over. Looking at the angle of the hooves now (which seem to be on the ground since they're both flat at the same level) I'm guessing it's intentional.
More complicated: Her left foreleg (furthest to our right) looks a little stocky... The show isn't strict on it but normally the forelegs thin a little to the "knee" (horse term, wrist if you know the pentadactyl limb view). [link] [link] It's subtle and mostly only emphasised if the hooves are turned slightly, which yours aren't but at the moment it somewhat stops the forelegs looking as elegant as the hind ones.
In my opinion anyway, and I thought lineart stage is probably a better time then end product to point out nitpicks.
You are right about the knee, I will fix it!
Actually she was meant to be flying, and I have already completed the background sky, but now that you mention it I am viewing it under another perspective, and it could be interesting if I try and make a background that make she look like she is rearing up. Maybe I will upload both versions, but I suck at backgrounds.
Btw, thanks a lot. Really!
I look forward to seeing the finished product!
Here's the link [link] if you haven't already seen it.
Let me know what do you think